The team treat

This is one of my first stories please critique it and give me any advice. I am planning more in this series.

Tina was team manager for the Harleem township highschool. She was a pretty, if slightly plump, girl. She stood 5’4” tall, 125lbs with large 36 D breasts. Her light brown hair fell to just below her shoulders. She was 15 years old and had a bubbly, friendly personality.

As team manager she took care of the water, running new balls out and that sort of thing. Her other important duty lay in minor medical treatment. She would bandage ankles and wrists, apply ice to strained muscles, etc. This had her in the locker room quite often. The boys in the locker room would walk around in various states of undress, including complete nudity. They were used to her being there and never bothered hiding their nudity from her.

One evening in early September would change everything. While the team members were all showering, Tina was called in to wrap the knee of Josh Stevens one of the running backs. As she worked on him she bent over to make sure she was getting it tight. Her face was just inches from his naked cock.

“While you’re down there why don’t you suck me off.” He said smirking.

“Fuck you, Josh” she shot back.

“Shit, Tina. I know being around all this cock makes you wet.” With that he grabs the back of her head and grinds her face against his rapidly hardening penis. “You’re just looking for an opportunity to get your holes filled.”

“Stop it Josh, this isn’t funny!”

“Damn right it isn’t!” He snarls. Jerking back on her hair he causes her to gasp in pain. With her mouth open he forces his hard rod between her lips.