The Barfly – ch. 2, rewrite

Prologue

I would like to thank those that have read my stories ancommented on them. This is a complete rewrite of the second chapter of my story “The Barfly” originally posted in the forum.

I would like to ask those of you that honor me with negative votes in groups to leave some comments so that I may learn what readers dislike in my stories. I would also like to ask those of you that like my stories to throw a wote my way to keep them in an accessible position.

Enjoy
J. Bailey


The Barfly, ch. 2, rewrite

He woke up the morning after to the smell of coffee. At first he was a bit disoriented since he lived alone but then it hit him. He had taken a girl home last night, The girl from the bar, Natasha, the skinny one. He had to do something about changing her figure, he thought, her current state could be hazardous to his health if he bumped into her in the dark. He smiled to himself about the crack-ass joke.

The final test of his new ability to control another person had gone well he thought to himself. He had discovered months earlier that he was different from other people and after some initial experiments he had started work on the expansion and refinement of his abilities. While experimenting he found out that he could manipulate peoples minds. He had started with little things like coaxing the girls at his firm to ask him if he liked some coffee or if he liked anything from the coffee shop around the corner.

He found out that he could make them forget things that had happened and he was also able to make them remember things that had not happened. He was able to make them believe that things they were doing where their own idea, and feel good about it. And he was starting to read peoples minds. He found out that some things he could do faster when he touched the person he was manipulating but he was getting better and better in manipulating people without having to touch them.

Natasha was the final experiment and it seemed to be a success. He got up from the bed and went to the bathroom to take a leak, a quick shower and to brush his teeth.

“Good morning Natasha” he said as he entered the kitchen area. She was putting plates and cutlery on the table along with various food items from his refrigerator wearing his bathrobe. He walked up to her and put his arms around her from behind. She smiled and let her head fall back onto his shoulder. His left arm crossed her body just under her breasts, pushing them up a bit, while his right hand unfastened the knot on the bathrobe and tickled her skin from his left arm down to her pussy lips causing her to tremble. She moaned into his ear.

“Charlie that feels so nice, please kiss me.” She closed her eyes and turned in his arms looking for his lips and kissed him with a passion that surprised him. Even after their encounter last night. He sensed a strong feeling of passion emanating from her mind and kissed her probing her mouth with his tongue using his ability to stimulate her even further.

As he kissed her she noticed that he had brushed his teeth before coming into the kitchen and decided that she liked it. As his tongue started to probe her mouth she again felt that tingling sensation causing her knees to go week. He let his hands slide under the bathrobe, down to her butt and cupped her cheeks causing her to tremble and moan into his probing kiss. She broke the kiss and looked into his eyes.

“You are making me horny again, Charlie” she said a bit out of breath. He smiled and kissed her on the forehead.

“It’s all your fault” he replied and she looked at him with a questioning look in her beautiful face.

“Well if your body wasn’t this sexy you wouldn’t make me horny and then you wouldn’t have to suffer the torture of me making you horny again. You see it’s all you fault” he said with a grin. She looked at him and shook her head in disbelief.

“You are crazy” she finally said, still shaking her head.

“That may very well be” he replied with a big smile. “What plans did you have for the weekend?”

“Actually on the top of my wish list was; to get drunk, perhaps to meet some nice people and get laid, if I’m lucky. And then perhaps use one day to cure my hangover. Actually I do have a lot of time to cure my hangover since I’m just starting a two weeks vacation” she smiled at him and he kissed her on the tip of her nose.

“Well you got laid, I think that is a good start. Maybe we can arrange something regarding the nice people and the hangover.” She looked at him, slid her hand into his briefs and grabbed hold of his cock.

“I think I just met two nice guys so I suspect you only owe me a hangover.” She started to slowly massage his stiffening pole with her hand, looking at him with a kinky smile. He grabbed both her nipples, twisted them softly and felt them grow hard between his fingers. She moaned and got down onto her knees.

“But I owe YOU an orgasm or two” she pulled his cock from his briefs and started to lick on it’s head before taking it into her mouth and suck softly as if it were a lollipop. “Mmmmm he is clean down here as well” she thought, “and he put on clean underwear, I definitely like him…” He enjoyed the sensation and simply let go of his feelings, getting extremely aroused. Her mouth felt warm and soft on his head and as she started to push down on him she moaned on each downstroke, tickling his head with the vibration of her voice.

He couldn’t stand the sensation anymore and sat down on one of the kitchen chairs and simply enjoyed the feeling. Natasha kept moving her lips up and down on his shaft and he felt his ball sack harden. She seemed to sense that he was close and her sucking got more intensive until suddenly, he came. His body tensed an he came into her mouth but she kept sucking until she had sucked him completely dry.

What amazed him was that she swallowed his entire load without as much as blinking. As she had sucked him dry and finished cleaning him up with her mouth she straddled his lap rubbing her slit up and down his still semi hard cock until her clit made contact with his head. She gyrated her lower body, sighed and laid her head on his shoulder.

“Did you enjoy it?” she whispered into his ear. He just nodded, with his eyes closed, trying to catch his breath, enjoying the feeling of her hard nipples on his naked chest and her warm pussy on his cock. He put his arms around her under the robe and held her tight, tickling her back and the crack between her butt cheeks kissing her temple while he came down from his orgasm. He relished the sensation of her warm body on his skin and took a deep breath.

“Natasha, I would like to invite you to my cabin for the rest of the weekend. If you are interested, that is.” She raised her head and looked into his eyes for a while.

“I would like that.” She kissed him deeply and her nipples tickled his chest. After a while he broke the kiss.

“Then, let’s have breakfast and get going.” He kissed her on the forehead again and pushed her up onto her feet. She pouted and it was obvious she wanted more but he didn’t give her a chance to sulk and simply sat down at the table, poured himself a cop of coffee and started to eat, wearing nothing but his briefs. She sat down on the other side of the table and did the same.

As they finished their breakfast and had put everything away he asked her if she had any outdoor clothing at her place. She shook her head and told him no. He took her hand and led her into a guest bedroom where he opened a closet and told her to look if she could find anything that fitted her. He then went over to his bedroom to get dressed.

As he returned she was dressed in a pair of baggy sweat pants, a white T-Shirt, and a grey sweatshirt with a hood and a zipper in the front. She was also wearing white cotton socks and a pair of Nike jogging shoes. She turned around her own axis as to present her self and posed for him.

“You like?” He nodded his head and took her into his arms.

“You look smashing” he told her and kissed her on the side of her neck. She smiled happily not knowing that he was manipulating her mind, adjusting it to his own needs and wishes.

“I think we should stop by, at the mall, so you can shop around for a few things you will need during the weekend.” She looked at him and sent him a beaming smile. He was so considerate and nice, yet he hardly knew her. They locked the house and walked over to his car, a black Mercedes, four wheel drive, with shaded windows. Their first stop was at a mall where she bought everything she needed, like underwear some extra clothes and such. He paid for everything she bought and she was in heaven. A warm feeling of happiness filled her entire body.

They got back into the car and started the journey to his cabin holding hands. While they were driving he adjusted her mind making her horny and bisexually oriented. At the outskirts of town they saw a hitchhiker ahead. He started to slow down and as Natasha discovered that it was girl she asked if they could take a look at her and invite her along if she fancied her. He looked at her, smiled over her enthusiasm and stopped. The hitchhiker turned out to be a cute little brunette by the name of Karen. She was wearing a tight T-shirt, jeans, sneakers and what seemed like white cotton socks. As far as he could see she had a stout pair of firm, heavy D cup breasts and a nice figure. As she was not wearing a bra he could se that her nipples were dark and a bit fluffy. They asked her where she was going and she told them she was going east and asked if she could tag along as far as they were going.

They invited her into the car and as she and her things were safely aboard he stretched out his hand and said:

“Charles…” She took his hand and found a tingling sensation that made her knees get a bit wobbly. She hesitated a moment and said:

“Karen…”

“And this beautiful lady is Natasha.”

Thus started the mental conditioning of Karen. He made the little brunette hot for Natasha and to himself and then waited how things would evolve. Natasha started a conversation with Karen about where she was going and why. Karen told them she was 19 years of age, had no family and that she was on a cross country trip to see the sights and see if she might land a job somewhere.