Not so little brother: Chapter 1

This is my first attempt at a story so I would appreciate any comments, suggestions, and criticisms. It is a work of fiction and I intend to write several more chapters.



I guess I should introduce myself…My name is Charlie and my brother’s name is Steven. I’m currently 21 but this is about something that happened a couple years back…

My brother and I used to share a room. He’s 3 years younger than me so for a long time that wasn’t a problem. We hadn’t hit puberty yet and didn’t have the shyness that comes with it. We’d change in front of each other, occasionally share a shower, and use the toilet at the same time. We had bunk beds.

When I was 12 my parents decided that it would be a good idea for us to have separate rooms. I had started puberty and had grown uncomfortable changing in front of my brother. I talked to my dad and he agreed that it was the right thing to do. We had a play room which was always going to be turned into my room when we got old enough and that’s what we did. It only took about a week before the entire move was done and I was settled in, happy, to go through puberty in privacy. My brother and I didn’t see each other naked from then on.

When I was 17 my family decided to take a two week long vacation to Florida and that we would get two rooms. One for them and one for Steven and me. It would be two weeks of fun in the sun.

Now for a bit of info about myself at the time when the rest of the story takes place. I was your average guy; there was absolutely nothing special about me. I was 17 years old and nearing the end of puberty. I’m about 5’7” and 130 lbs. I have brown hair and brown eyes. I’m a rather slim guy and decently hairy. My dick isn’t anything special either. I’m just about average with an uncut dick that measures a little under 6”. Nothing to brag about but nothing to be ashamed of either. I was still a virgin at that point. I was unsure of my sexuality and really confused.

My brother was 14 at this point and about 5’6”. That’s really all I knew. He had brown hair and brown eyes as well. He was skinny too but he has a nice body. People often mistook us for twins and were pretty surprised to find out that I was 3 years older than him. I was in high school at this point and he was in middle school still so we never hung out and we had different friends. Hell, we barely saw each other when we were home except for at meals.

Back to the story…

After the 4-hour plane flight to Florida and the ride to the hotel we unpacked our clothes and headed out to dinner. My parents were really tired so they decided that they were gonna head to bed and that left me and Steven to head back to our room. We were always a night-time shower family so it wasn’t a surprise to me when, on the walk from the elevator, Steven called first dibs on the shower. I thought about calling age seniority on him but I figured I’d live through the 10 minutes he’d need to shower. Whatever.

We get to the room and I flop down on our bed and turn on the TV to see if there’s anything good on. Out of the corner of my I realize that my brother is taking his clothes off; he’s facing me. I cautiously watched as he stripped down. I’ll admit, my brother had a nice body and I had glanced at him more than once whenever we were swimming. I’d thought that he was kind of hot for a couple years but nothing could have prepared me. I figured that he was going to stop at his boxers and bring a clean pair into the bathroom with him to change into after but I was wrong. Steven slipped down his boxers, stepped out of them, and stood up to reveal a sizable cock. As I said, I don’t have a big dick. I’m just under 6” hard and maybe 3” soft so what my brother pulled out was huge to me. Soft my brother’s cock must have been 6” long and thicker than mine was when hard. I tried not to show any expression as my brother turned and walked to the bathroom and shut the door behind him. Seconds later I heard the shower turn on.

I couldn’t get my mind off of his dick. How the fuck could my brother have such a big cock and me have one so small? I was the older brother God damnit! This wasn’t fucking fair! And we looked so alike too! And at the same time, I was kind of turned on. He did have a really nice body. He was slim, not too skinny, and had a nice “V” leading down to a nicely trimmed bush of light brown pubes out of which sprouted that monster. And those big balls hanging below his dick looked delicious. How big is it hard? I could only begin to wonder.

It was about 20 minutes before I heard the shower end but it seemed like only a moment since I was so entranced by the image of my brother’s cock still imprinted on my mind’s eye.