Me and mom, Under the covers, In the cold (Ch1 Rewritten)

Hello readers, Many of you likely do not remember my first story
and that is okay, for it was written months ago and I’ve learned much since then.
This is a rewrite of my first one, including many spelling/grammar errors.
After months of reading countless stories, studying writing structure and reading feedback from others
Without furteradue I give you



Me and mom, Under the covers, In the cold (REWRITTEN)


(completely fictional, just a fantasy of mine, all names have been changed)
Any similarities are 100% fictional.


The night was cold, The house was quiet and felt lifeless.
It was the complete opposite though you see, My mom was in her room sleeping
well she was as far as I knew. My mother isn’t the prettiest woman, nor is she
one of the most attractive but growing up she was always the center of my thoughts
when it came time to…release as some might say.

My mom (kathy) stands about 4’6″ with dark hair that comes just 3 inches above her waist.
She’s equipped with a slightly hangign 36C breasts and a rear which sticks out so much, you feel the urge
to just grab it with both hands and squeeze each cheek.
About myself, My names Jimmy but most people just call me Jim since it’s shorter.
Next to my mother I stand a towering 6’2″ with a medium build, not fat but nor any hulk.
My father passed away with I was 4 and now me, my mom and my step sister live in a 3 bed room house together.



My step father (charles) was out of town picking up my sister.
She was staying at some families house to get away for a little while.
As I laid quietly in my room, I wondered what my mom was doing, was she sleeping?