it happened on vacation (and continued at home) pt 9

NOTE:
Thank’s for the compliments and pointing out grammatical errors. I’m not trying to make excuses but I write these stories under less than ideal conditions being at work and at home my girlfriend is around a lot and wouldn’t understand, let alone condone my writing, so I write when/how I can.
I don’t use WORD at work. I worry about something residual left over even after deletion. I’m not a techie guy and perhaps thats is not a problem but I don’t know or take the chance.
We don’t have WORD on the home computer and use Open Office, which is a generic WORD program but again I don’t want anything left over because of my girlfriend ?.
What I’ve been doing is writing stories on my web based email account and saving it as a draft. This way it’s not on either computer and I can access it from anywhere. I cut & paste from the email onto the story site. I also don’t visit the story site at work “just in case” !.

On part 8 I had a little bit of time before my gf came home so I cut & pasted the story from the email to Open Office to see it better, did quick proofreading then cut and pasted it onto the story site. Before publishing it looked fine (grammar was another matter as has been correctly pointed out) however, after it was published and I logged back on to the story site and noticed quotation marks, comma’s, etc, are replaced with questions marks ???
Something between Open Office and the email I guess ?. When I paste directly from the email onto the story site, like I did with other stories, I didn’t see that problem ?.

Above all I hope the stories do what I intend which is 1. They get you HOT, 2. misdirects and keeps you guessing/wanting more, 3. Gives me something creative to do and 4. Allows me to improve my writing. I can tell you that # 3 has been achieved and I think # 4 is improving.
I hope through the series I have fooled everyone a few times like who Sis and I were caught by, and I figured everyone thought Sis was blowing Dad in part 8 and that Mom also fucked me which ended up being a dream (at 1st anyway) and of course there was………..oops, almost gave away some of part 9 or 10 ???.

I will strive to do a better job and again, Thank You.

And now I hope you enjoy “it happened on vacation (and continued at home)” pt 9:

After Mom had sucked and licked me clean we laid back exhausted, at least I know I was !.
We laid there for an undetermined amount of time not talking, touching, spooning or cuddling rather there was space between us and that was fine with me. I just had mindblowing sex and now I didn’t feel like touching her or wanting her to nor did she attempt to touch me, I don’t understand the ambivalence ?.
The sex was as great as my dream had been yet it ended different than I anticipated.
When a word was spoken it was her, “sweetie, we can’t stay like this, you better go to you’re room”, she said.
I stood and picked up my clothes then looked at her. She had rolled onto her side with her back to me. I wanted to say “I love you” but it just didn’t seem right. I do love my Mom dearly but as strange as it seems saying it would have sounded and felt out of context ?.
“Goodnight Mom”, I said.
“Night sweetie”, was all she said.

In my room I strained to make sense of EVERYTHING.