Bleach: sister revised

This was edited by Nivek_88. All credit should go to him.


Hello. My name is Karin Kurosaki and I have problem.

Lately I have been having strange feelings for my twin sister, Yuzu. I don’t know when it started, but since it did it won’t go away. We are both 12 years old, about 4’10”, black hair, blue eyes, and a chest that is just starting to form. It scares me, because every time I look at her now my heart skips a beat and I get these strange feelings between my legs, I don’t understand it. I’ve never felt this way before and I’m not sure what’s going on. I wanna put it out of my head, but this is something I can’t avoid, and to be honest I’m not even sure I want to.

It gets worse, not only am I constantly thinking Yuzu when I’m awake, but as soon as I close my eyes to sleep there she is again. Every night I go to sleep, I have dreams about her; sexy dreams, erotic dreams, dreams a girl should not be having about her sister. They all involve the same thing, us naked and doing naughty stuff, like me kissing her little boobies, her running her hands all over my body, and our tongues dancing together as we kiss each other passionately while grinding our bodies together and caressing each others soft, smooth booty between our small, nimble fingers. I always lose it when she trails kisses down my body, past my belly button and directly on to my little pussy, kissing it and licking it and sucking it into her mouth like its the best thing she’s ever tasted. They all end the same way, with me shaking under her until a surge shoots through my little body and out my pussy, tiring me out and dropping me into a great night’s sleep. I wake up the next day feeling hot and sweaty and my panties are always wet and sticky. Even though I know Yuzu had nothing to do with it, I can’t help but feel guilty about it. I can’t even look her in the face anymore without blushing. This has been happening every night for a while now, so I wasn’t surprised when it happened last night, but this time it felt different, almost real, little did I know how real things were going to get.

I woke up this morning after another naughty dream where instead of her licking me, I am licking her between her legs! This has never happened before, me pleasuring her, so naturally I didn’t know what to think of it. The thought of me licking her sent a chill through my body, and as crazy as it sounds it made me a little wet. I tried to force these thoughts out of my head, but they just kept coming back more vivid and more frequently. I realized now that I had a serious problem, but decided I’d try my best not to think about it and made my way to the bathroom and drowned my sorrows away under a nice hot shower, they always seem to help.




I put on my school uniform and washed my face and brushed my teeth after combing my hair, then make my way to the kitchen where I’m sure everyone else is. Walking through the hallway and to the kitchen I can already hear my 15 year old brother, Ichigo, and our dad fighting at 6:30 in the morning, this is going to be a very long day.




“Dammit dad! Why is it every fucking morning you come running into my room and attack me when I’m just waking up?!”




Dad has a shit-eating grin on his face. “It’s all a part of training son! I have to know my boy is strong!”




“This isn’t a dojo! It’s a fucking house! Keep doing that and I’ll need a damn hospital!”




“Hey now you watch your language in front of your sister!”




I rolled my eyes as I sat down at the table. “Like I care what you guys say anyway, it’s too early in the morning for you guys to be acting stupid.”




Dad gasps in horror and turns to a life size poster of our dead mother as tears run down his face. “Honey, our sweet little girl has turned on her father!”




“Oh god dad will you take that stupid poster down already? And stop with the fake tears!” I yelled.




I was about to keep on ranting and raving when I heard soft footsteps and saw the vision of an angel as my twin sister Yuzu walked into the kitchen, effectively silencing us with her angelic voice.




“Now all of you stop fighting this minute or no one gets breakfast and I mean it!”




Everyone obeys. Yuzu rules the kitchen. Without her none of us would eat. I’ve gotten so obsessed with her I can’t even bring myself to look at her, instead I look down blushing, thinking of every dream I’ve had with her. Yuzu notices and looks at me with a worried expression.




“Karin, are you ok? Your face is all red.”




“I-I’m fine, just feeling a little weird today that’s all, nothing big!” I manage to stammer.



She looked at me as if she knew something was wrong, but didn’t wanna push it, and perked up. “Ok, well as long as you’re ok,” she said as she flashed that smile that makes you smile right back.


I wanted to just sit there and stare at her all day, but I knew that was a bad idea, and I didn’t wanna make anyone suspicious, so I tore my gaze away from her and looked at anything else I could focus my attention on. Yuzu made breakfast for us and we ate quickly with the usual table talk, the whole time me stealing glances at her. Whenever she caught me she’d smile and go back to eating or talking to Ichigo or dad, who were now both calm as they exchanged conversation. I don’t know how she does it, but Yuzu just has this way about her that calms everyone down, like she has a soothing effect on people. Maybe that’s what is getting to me, making me see her as an object of desire, I hope I can figure it out soon because if I don’t its gonna drive me crazy. We cleaned up our dishes and grabbed our bags as we headed out the door to school, yelling goodbye to dad and Ichigo as we left.