Beastly passion ch1

Ok, I have never wrote before, all constructive criticism is very welcome just don’t ass rape me with it. I chose Werewolves because of the sheer carnal passion I associate with the myth. This is just the opening and first chapter. If I get positive feed back on it I will keep writing. Thanks everyone

Dallas, Texas….Date –Today
(opening)
Hungry, Ivory, teeth watches her with coal black eyes. Her trek from work to home always has its perils. Gang members, robbers and rapists prowl these late night streets. But tonight only he stirs. No hookers on the streets on a night like tonight. They all believe in what she is about to know first hand. Its not just an urban legend it is reality. He moves with silence and determination. He can smell her. Not her 200 dollar bottle of perfume, but her. Her scent like an aura as she moves through the ally ways and streets. She walks by a dumpster and he sees his moment. He is on her in an instant.
Slammed to the ground she gasps and is horrified. He is uncontrollable ripping and tearing her cloths off like they were no more than pieces of news paper. She looks up and wishes she hadn’t. Bright white teeth seem to have their own iridescence under the dim glow of a small door light. Slobber dripping from his frothing mouth. He snarls wide to show his aggression and determination. She tries to scream but nothing comes out. Frozen with fear.
He swats her shoulder with his massive left paw. Rolling her to her stomach. She lays there naked waiting for the death blow to come but it does not. She feels his hot breath on her neck and drool sliding down and covering part of her right breast. Then a long wet toung coils around her neck and under her chin across her throat, then slithers back. He huffs and she feels his scalding breath as it blows part of her hair back and over her face. Then its gone.
She waits a moment then slowly starts to raise up on her hands and knees. When she hears and feels that hot breath again. This time its between her legs. He presses his nose firmly against her pussy and inhales deeply. She stays there motionless afraid to move. He pulls his nose away then shoves it back almost knocking her over. Her hands slip on the pavement and her face slams hard onto the surface with her ass sticking straight up in the air. With that he mounts her.
His 12 inch long 4 inch wide cock is driven into her almost to the hilt. She screams in pain and finally able to move begins thrashing to get the massive member out of her. But it is no use. His strong fore arms and paws holding her tightly in place. He thrusts in and out with so much force she think she is going to be impaled on his cock.
After ten minutes or so the pain has subsided and his cock is gliding inside her with ease. His thrusts increase and she is immediately thrown into uncontrollable orgasm. One after another hit her like tidal waves crashing on the beach.